Fic: Gekiranger- Long's Revenge 2/4
Jan. 3rd, 2010 04:13 am![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
chiakiangelJan shifted inside his cell, trying to pull himself out of the chains. He had to get out, Retsu and the others were waiting for him.
Hearing a loud bang, Jan’s head snapped up to see the door had been slammed open. Long stormed into the room looking extremely angry, “Even when you’re here you’re making a mess of my plans!”
Jan yanked against the chains, completely ignoring Long. He couldn’t bother listening to him, he had to leave.
Long pulled open the cell door and slammed his foot into Jan’s side, sending him sprawling to the ground. He bent down and pulled him up by his hair and made Jan look him in the eye, “I’m going to destroy you GekiRed, but not before I’ve had my fun.”
He threw him down before standing back up, “You’re friends are coming brat.”
Jan’s head snapped up to look at Long, a fierce look in his eyes.
“I’ll kill them before they even reach you…”
Jan shook his head in disagreement, “Uh-uh, they won’t be beaten that easy!”
Long shook in rage and he took another strike at Jan before stomping out of the cell. “You’re childish beliefs are pathetic, GekiRed.”
He then turned and left the room completely.
Jan pushed himself back up and held on to his side. “Ow… Ran, Retsu, they’ll definitely win!”
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Retsu dodged another strike to his back before he flipped over his attacker, and kicked him in the back.
Ran was doing good as well, and soon took down her last opponent as well.
Once they had all been downed, Ran looked over to Retsu with a slight frown, “Retsu, we have to find Jan. It’s clear he didn’t just disappear, someone has him! We have to find him…”
Retsu de-henshined and placed a comforting hand on her shoulder, “We will Ran, don’t worry.”
He turned back towards the direction they had been going, and continued going the same way. “We’re obviously going the right way, if we weren’t, they wouldn’t have tried to stop us. Now let’s go.”
Ran nodded and followed after him. ‘Jan…’
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Long snarled in anger as he swiped a pile of books to the floor.
“That damn brat. If it wasn’t for him, everything would have gone perfectly. Even when he’s here, he makes a mess of my plans. Because of him, his friends are destroying my plans now, unknowingly, but it’s because of GekiRed!”
Dark laughter was heard from the corner of the room, “Calm down Long, you’ll have your revenge. You already have the boy.”
Long looked up from the mess towards the voice, “Jigoku, what do you want?”
The so called Jigoku only laughed again, “Honestly Long, do you not listen? I told you that before, I want the GekiJyuken brat dead, that’s all.”
Long frowned, “I’m already dealing with him, so leave.”
Jigoku shook his head, “He may have ruined your fun Long, but he ruined my life, don’t think I’ll leave without having some revenge of my own…”
“You never told me, Jigoku, just how did the brat ruin your life?”
Jigoku closed his eyes in response to Long’s question, “It’s simple. Him and his friends destroyed RinJyuDen, that was my life’s work.”
Long narrowed his eyes, “That was Maku, wasn’t it?”
“You really don’t pay attention, do you Long? If you live eternally, you really should. Maku was my son, so in essence, RinJyuDen was mine. The brat destroyed everything, so I’ll make him suffer before I let you kill him…”
Long only frowned before leaving the room. That Jigoku always unnerved him.
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(I don’t even know if I’m doing the characterization of the characters right… I’m trying my best though. Long… well it’s a given I can’t get him, to me, he didn’t really have a personality on the show, other than crazy. I think there may be a couple more parts to this, but who knows…)
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